daganjarret

They moved west to have new life,to start a new world. They also wanted to have more land to sell crops. They got more crops so they can sell them for a good profit.They got less population their because its a new land to start on and people were just coming for the same reason. They also wanted to get away from war zones so no one will get hurt in their family.

Jarret

Your sentences need to be a little more detailed for 8th grade work.

Much better!!

10/10

I think it sounds really good. Good sentences too.

Line 1: First name Line 2: Four traits that describe the person Line 3: Position or job Line 4: Longing for (three things or ideas) Line 5: Who feels (list three things) Line 6: Who needs (three things) Line 7: Who fears (three things) Line 8: Who gives (three things) Line 9: Who would like to see (three things)

Line 10: Last name

Andrew War Hero,military,commander,veteran commander to win war,defeat red sticks creek,seize Flordia strong goverment,remove indians,war hero Union preservation, tariff, nominating conventions Indian removal act. Error. Nullification No rights to Native American, more rights to white males more land,goverment,andrew native americans move,free debt Jackson

very nice 15/15